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Standing There

Nervousness shoots through my soul, my entire being, as I stand before his door.

How hard can it be to tell the man that I love that I am slowly dying of something he gave me.

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Should be two lines. Don't know if the last few words made it into the second line.

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  • AbidoodleCullen
    August 31
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    OMGGG!
    I can so0o0o see this story laid out!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    Abi