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Survival

All these secrets,
I try to hide.
Everyone seems to see,
the lies in my eyes
Crystal clear tears,
roll down reddened cheeks.
Life is difficult,
this is no lie.
No one will survive,
which is why we die.
Maybe someday
we'll be revived,
but for now,
we can do nothing but live

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I was kinda upset...ok, a lot upset.

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