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Everytime

Sometimes my head will be spinning,
my mind is rushing around.
The words they keep coming,
but I can't understand.

When my world comes crashing down,
I always wonder about you,
I wonder about us...
Everytime.

I keep looking for the answer,
but the question is unwritten.
The hints, they are hidden,
and can't be found.

When my life is a huge mess,
I look for you,
I always call for you...
Everytime.

Author notes

Just something I wrote in Ag class the other day..

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