Thought this would never begin because you, well, you know how you can be and me, well I know you don't know how I can be, but, it started out mutual, Both of us acting reserved and polished, especially you, lol, then turned into something we only can describe. Or can we?
All I know is I think of you constantly when I hear you and even when I don't. Makes me wonder many days, do you ever sometimes just a little think of me? If you don't, that's okay too cause I know you're busy and stuff and I'm probably the last person on your mind, but hidden under all the daily goings and tendings, I still wish it was.
It's like now, my thoughts are on you and hoping you're well even though in the back of my mind, I know somewhere, somehow you'd like to talk just for a little while. Would you like that?
We've taught each other so much in our old age, lol. At least I would like to think so.
Anyway, you will probably be too busy or get too bored to give me a second thought. Who am I kidding? You are popular and I'm just a....
You know what? If the future goes like we both know it will go
I'll see you on the other side.
I love you.
Please tell me what you think
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very sweet and sad
i can truely understand this poem its hard to remember what you had and to be left behind your sadness really hits my heart on this one i love it
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wow..
this is so sweetly tender.. i love it.. but it will look more astethically appeealling if you 'reformat' it.. just a suggestion..otherwise it's soft, and wonderfully penned..
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Losing a love is a tremendous loss. The heart is broken, feeling like a zombie, life is useless to many. When I thought I lost my wife for good because I would not make the comittment there was no life. I traveled far to get her back best thing I ever did in our lives. Life will be better when you are stronger. Very sad to hear that you are going through this Rita. Good luck.
Brian
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Brian thanks for reading my poem. Sensitivity in your comment is well noted and appreciated, but this is only a poem that was brought forth after reading one of my many books I enjoy. It's good to hear all is finally well with your family.
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