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Her Eyes

When the light
Touches them

Multiple suns erupt
And the Universe is born
Out of the depths
Of a black abyss
Swimming with a thousand
Golden comets
That glitter and orbit
The shimmering suns
Spinning within
Amber galaxies
And topaz asteroids
Float in Space

Author notes

This poem is basically about that moment that you look into a girl's eyes as they catch the light.

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