A deep breath is all I need.
Just smell the cold
As crisp apple air
Changes the worlds colors
From dull green and blue
To bright orange and yellow.
Hearing leaves crackle as I dance,
Following a barely-there path
That leads deep into
A secret golden forest
Alive with the sounds
Of whispers and wind.
In the clearing deep within
Where my dancing
Slows to spinning,
I fall on my back
And beg the Autumn sky
To fall into me.
Author notes
Fall is my favorite season.
A contest entry
- I LOVE Autumn ~ Do You? by Still Standing.
1200 points, ended September 15, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be as honest as possible and as harsh as you wish.
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Wonderful
This is very expressive and full of amazing images...thank you so much for entering and good luck! -
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Thank you!!!
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This is very good!! I have read some of your stuff you are a great writer. you should enter this in this contest about fall, http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2459079
only crticism i have is on, "Hearing leave crackle as I dance" should be "leaves"
Take care!!
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