Why you so obssesed with me?
Boy I want to know,
Like you just keep calling me,
When everybody knows,
Its clear that you upset with me,
Finally fond a girl that you couldnt empress,
Last man on the earth still couldnt live less,
You dolushinol you dulushinol,
Why you lossin your mind,
You confushinol you confushinol,
Why you wastin your time,
Got you all fired up,
You know you want me,
Say it it dont spray it,
I could wipe you up like windex,
Why so obssesed with me?
Do you think it was well written?
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Also, you spelled obsessed wrong. And confused. And delusional. Spellcheck is a wonderful invention.
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I'm disqualifying this poem. First off, you didn't put the prompt in your AN. Secondly, this is a Mariah Carrey song. Did you think that would fly over my head? You may have changed a couple of words around, but that's still plagarism. I'm not going to bother to critique it. To be honest, I'm incredibly disappointed that people feel the need to steal the lyrics from crap pop songs and post them as their poetry. I'm sure you have the creativity in you to write a poem of your own, and I urge you to do so. Use your words, not someone else's.
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well done but in some bits its a bit confusing like a spelling mistake or a strange word but otherwise it's good
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Thanks!
Thanks ya i know i was just messin around but thanks!
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