with a jasper history of suffering, childbirth should have been easy. a red agate nurse came in with scapels covered in shining rubies. she inwardly cried to her god for help, suddenly becoming aware of the garnet realisation that she is helpless. a coral blush rose up inside before settling on her dewy cheeks. the next seven hours would be a cycle of endless ruby blood shedding, and chrysoberyl screams of pain.
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part five? red gems.
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Sehr gut
This whole gemstone thing is really great it always works with the theme well. :]
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danke ^_^
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still lovin it!!!! BRAVA!!!!
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thanky! i'm a happy shadow now ^_^
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youre just weird. i like how you mix all the rocks in for adjectives though. Sid Barret would be proud of you
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it makes it prettier lol
thanks hon.... but who the fuck is sid barret?
and read them from the beginning!!!
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