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Hero(BTTS song lyrics)(Christian poem)

I hate to see you cry,
when your whole world seems to die
and all the people you care for stab you
when all youve done is show love...

Im here for you, but you dont even know me
you ignore my kindness, afraid it will bring pain...

I'd die for you, if it would help you
Im not just another heartless man...
When they come to hurt you
Ill be there to protect you...
Ill be your hero...

Once again he came to hurt you
You wonder why he wont go away
He comes with arms open wide,
then stabs you in the back...

I went to stop him... he thought he killed me
But you should have seen his face when he was taken away

I died for you, knowing it would help
He came to hurt you,
I was there to protect you...
I was your hero
And ill be with you soon

The world doesnt always need to bring pain
You just gotta learn to dance in the rain...

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  • izzy1804
    August 31
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    Brilliant....enjoyed it. Good luck


  • Gray-BTTS
    August 31
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    Thanks for the comment glad you liked it!


  • Puppydog gold member
    August 31

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    LOVELY INSPIRATION!!!

    Lovely! The words which show true and honest love, one which will overcome, remain after all is done with grace and faith.