midnight blues dance across a night sky of the deepest, richest tanzanite. shimmers of sky blue topaz break through the velvet luxury, like stars cutting pin pricks in the blanket of the sky. blue sapphire hopes crushed by blue diamond pity as they realise the other was just as unfaithful as the other. london blue topaz tears fall from boulder opal eyes once again.
Author notes
part three. blue gemstones.
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stunning word choices
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thanks for kind words.
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Oooh this one works really well
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thanky.
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"shimmers of sky blue topaz break through the velvet luxury, like stars cutting pin pricks in the blanket of the sky"......yes, the blues are resilient....
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many many thanks.
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This is my favorite so far. I wonder what it is about the imagery blue brings that makes it so attractive?
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dunno... i think its just one of those calming colors,ya know?
many thanks <3
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