Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

In Its Demise

In its demise
                   
                    the world prepares
 
                                                    to step toward
                                           

                                                what

it thinks                                                                            is right

                                                  only

                                                  to

                                                    F
                                                      A
                                                        L
                                                          L
                                                              !




Words: K.Botka
8/31/09

Author notes

Seventeen words exactly!

Mt 13:38 The field is the world; the good seed are the children of the kingdom; but the tares are the children of the wicked one;
39 The enemy that sowed them is the devil; the harvest is the end of the world; and the reapers are the angels.
49 So shall it be at the end of the world: the angels shall come forth, and sever the wicked from among the just,

A contest entry

How am I doing? :)

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 12

    Edit | Reply
    this form reminds me of my old wisdoms of practicing poetry, thank you for this entry nicely done
    thank you for joining in Linda


    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      September 12
      Edit | Reply

      Every once

      in a while I take a shot at 'Dirty Pretty'. This is a mild version, but I think appropriate.
      Glad you liked it.


  • Xxcant runxX
    September 1

    Edit | Reply
    wow confusing powerful and amazing
    great job i love it

    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      September 1

      Edit | Reply

      LOL...

      Confusing?...This is a mild version of what called Dirty Pretty! It' poetry in a form to bring about impact & I thought since the contest called for only 17 words that I'd go for as much impact as possible. Thanks for stopping by & for your comment!