morganite clothes cling to bedroom floors, across opposite sides of the city. kunzite memories are forged in minds of fabrication. they kiss repeatedly, rose quartz lips dancing together a flawless waltz on mirrored flooring. diamond lies and white sapphire hopes drown in a sea of lust, and love created from the past of misery.
Author notes
part two. basically very pale shades of gemstones.
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A contest entry
- freewrite--but i perfer dark, emo anything goes by foreveryourslove.
550 points, ended September 6, 77 entries
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love can do many things to us
We can move mountains, hearts and souls by just wishing then to be moved...mac
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thank you ^_^
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You did very good with flow, rhythm and sensual write. Awesome job with your metaphors and word choice. Very good in fact. Thank you for entering and good luck to you in my contest. I would be honored if you will be a friend to me in my AP family. Since you forgot to put what member you wanted to be that is what I am putting for now. I hope you will keep in touch and let me know if you want to change family members.
Hugs, Cat
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thank you, and thanks for the green ^_^
any position going i'll have, i really dont mind.
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O.0 I love your word-choice! It's so great because you've implicated all these metal/gemstones and it all becomes more vivid. Thank you for your comment earlier too; I appreciate it. Keep this up!
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no worries, and thanks for the kind words.
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well, crap, i will read it in its entirety when Im done here
rose quartz lips dancing together a flawless waltz on mirrored flooring. Breathtaking line here!!!
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lmao theres only one more!
thanks ever so much.
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ooo *saves to 'naughty favs'*
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Once again another great poem ^_^ I'm liking this series a lot heehe!
I loved 'rose quartz lips dancing together a flawless waltz on mirrored flooring.'
^_^
<3
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i'm having fun writing it coz i have so many stones to chose from...
thanks for help love <3
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