emerald kisses shatter at infidelity, as lovers seperate for another night. she kisses lips of colombia while he kisses lips of brazil. diopside eyes sink into a jade forest in the iris of another. peridot eyes find green sapphire eyes across a bar full of whores. green beryl clothes drop to the floor as once again they break marriage vows sacred.
Author notes
part one in series. all references are to emeralds and green stones.
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yey!!
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kool
Kool poem =) ,wow this is stunning
and the imagery is very good
you have a unique style of writing, well done , wonderful k
byyyyyyyyyye k
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The imagery here is second to none.....
"diopside eyes sink into a jade forest in the iris of another"
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-whispers- i had help with that line....
many thanks, glad you liked ^_^ i'm thinking of making them longer and into like a mini novel...
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*mutters* 'into' and 'iris' are dirty words when used together. im still confused
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this is number one. you read the last one first lol
and they so arent lol!
<3
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I like this lots!! Can't wait for all of them ^_^
Ise happy my msn help was of use haaha
<3
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lmao me too!
cheers hon.
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