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this day

This day.....
pleads with me to stay
as my thoughts beg to differ
contemplating......
losing my way,

I have instilled a pain
that has ripped through me like Armageddon
while I fade to black
this life is myself forbidden.

My eyes melt,
as memories collapse
breaking into a thousands shards
of the futures/past
nothing I can do to make it last
nostalgia breaks me in half.

People,
they come as they go
no-one surrenders
a battle unfolds
I am the center of this piece
take my soul
I am deceased.

The sun reflects
a light I cant see
the darkness clones me
I am not free
nor will I ever be.

I Gaze,
I stare,
I look,
I compare
life is a betrayal
death is fair.

I want to go
far and away
I beg, I plead
for .....
this day!

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  • Sable May
    August 31

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    The form was fantastic, the somber theme made it relatable to most. I really enjoyed reading this poem, and will try to find some time to read more of your work.


    • lostinthevoid
      September 1
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      thanks

      thankyou for stopping bye, I appreciate your comment! I will have to make a speacial trip to your page and read some of your poems as well.