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Blood and Gore

Missing image
Blood and gore
is all I see
all over
the front of me

Not sure
how this came to be
no injuries on me
do I see

There are no scrapes
no holes or cuts
so where it all came from
is driving me nuts……..

~vampi~

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  • Topnotchsy
    September 15

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    That picture is as twisted as they come, and this looks like it's not quite finished, but it's a powerful start. Not my style poem to be honest, but any poem that moves you is a good poem.

  • StabbyJack
    September 8
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    yes were oh where could it have come from


  • sevnsyn silver member
    August 31

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    Cool Twisted

    This is cool-twisted..I really like it. It has a great flow to it to!