Pic by: deathsorceres
Treacherous reefs strive
to break love vessel,
bring dissonance in water beat,
in haze cosy embrace we take refuge
dance celestial waltzes
played by countless violins.
Melodious breeze fondles
feather waves’ froth.
I hold your hand of rosy light
tighten my grip, as my eyes meet
with your soul of tempting white.
Seagulls glide effortlessly
above tidal waves whisperer’s place
souls sisters in pristine mantles
hooves pounding on the shoreline
generate love with each sprinkle.
Dark omens have now receded
and your silver sandals slide
I watch your sleek figure
creating perfect arabesques
like spiders modestly spin a web.
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A contest entry
- Pic Prompt (Horse Love) by Frogzter.
875 points, ended September 14, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very fine
alliteration and picture painting poet. Good work.
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An exquisite poem to read on this night !
A poetic vision of pure delight ..
Thank you for sharing !! Take care ,
Best wishes & hugs , friend EAsy
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Congratulations on a fine Poem loved it first read Well done on your HM
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Thank you it is a wonderful compliment comming from such a gifted poet.
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Wonderful imagery! Love this take on the prompt. It is soft, sensual and profound in meaning and depth. Thanks for entering and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
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Thank you so much for the HM and for hosting this lovely pic contest.
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Such melody in this piece, one could almost hear the music playing as they danced over the sands.Beautiful images painted by your words Excellent Good luck in the contest
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Excellent
wow, such amazing images you have created. so very well done. and perfect for the picture. Best of luck in the contest
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