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He promised her everything he had.

She pulls the car door closed,
Hands shaking violently
Her breath uneven
Her heart throbbing wildly
Tears start to pool in her soft blue eyes,
As somewhere above the hotel door slams shut.
Slowly she whimpers obsentiys
Turning the key and moving on with life.
But somehow she didn't mind this ending.
Hard, but quick, she thought.
No strung-out heart break this time
And that she could think him for.

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  • pitprincess
    November 9

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    This write comes to me wide open!
    I hate this happend to you if it did. But I for one know the feeling behind this write as I am going through the same thing.
    Wonderful write.


  • lil angel
    September 25
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    good poem i like it it is a bit sad but enjoyable well done