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Shattered

Missing image
Hold me tight.

I'm falling apart

Piece
by
Piece.


Nothing left.

I don't know where you are
Or why you're there.

But without
You
I'm hopeless.

Scattered around me
My heart still

Throbs.

Nothing
Could keep me away from
You.

So why aren't you
Here

Holding me?

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Option 3 - Pictures

Picture credit: http://www.dezeen.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/10/random-international-main.jpg

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  • StillLovingYou
    September 19
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    i came back to read this today.. to judge.. and it applies to my day so well......... my life is falling apart unwillingly... and i can't stop it.


  • StillLovingYou
    August 31

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    LOVED IT!!! definatly on the finalists list. loved it! you brought a new prospective to this picture. great job!