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bye friends and family

So close but so far away
never wanted this anyway.

If yesterday brings a better tomorrow
I'm never gonna see today.

My heart is broken my scars split open.

So this knife will be my god
and take my from this world.
Take me from this pain!

Take me by the hand
make it go away.
I'm leaving home
and if i never return
you don't have to remember me.

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  • Whisper Trinity
    August 31
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    Line 7: me*

    I will remembers you! FOREVER & ALWAYS!