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my senses

i hear your yells in silence
im crying all alone in my bed
and in my mind im already dead

i taste your kiss on my lips
im eating by myself tonight,
nothing can ever make this right

i see your face in my mind
but in time the memories will fade
and so will these deep cuts i made

i smell your colone in my room
everything reminds me of you
and all the pain you put my through

i feel your body on top of me
but i know your just a memory, a ghost
i know its fake, all these things i want most

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Written April 2nd, 2004

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