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Unbridled and Unsaddled

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unbridled and unsaddled

the white mare is free and alone

she travels into the enchanted garden

and begins to wander and roam

 

when she passes through the gate

she is given enchanted wings

by the fairies that come to greet her

joining together in melodic sings

 

the vines all trail around her hooves

and make a path of ivy green

she follows the path through the garden

and enjoyed the sites she has seen

 

butterflies flitting all around her

making mystic patterns in the sky

bees are humming as they buzz

creating rythmetic vibes when they fly

 

birds are chirping and singing songs

to each other as they lovingly mate

squirrels and bunnies chase each other

running in and out the garden gate

 

happy is the enchanted white mare

on her visit through the beautiful maze

enjoying all the happiness surrounding her

put her in a memorible and lasting daze

 

unbridled and unsaddled

she must visit the enchanted garden again

all she needs is another invitation

from the enchanted fairies within

 

 

 

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  • islekine gold member
    September 13

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    What a wonderful, magical trip

    you have taken me on...from quite a different perspective!
    Thanks so much for entering!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on!

    and

  • judmc
    September 1

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    Delightful

    Quite a lovely fantasy showing your love for animals and your aquiessense to the
    mystic fabulous world of Fairyland .I have named my latest poem after you it is called "The Little Leaf" hope you like it. Best Wishes...George....


  • rbruce gold member
    September 1

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    The enchanted garden is always there, right in front of us. Ask any child. Lovely poem sending vibes of tranquility out to us readers. Thank you for posting and sharing.


  • aboomer silver member
    August 31

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    Enchanting! Such a lovely, peaceful write. And wonderful flow also!
    (I love the picture and border - nice job with this, too!)
    best wishes in the contest


  • arafura gold member
    August 31
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    Magical!

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