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Deception for Alibi

Missing image

by brendan_ruane

 

from the epic poem, ∑סς, pt i

 

and the play, "Death by Virtue"

 

 

William in this piece, speaks, not of death,

nor the crows. In his own words, having been,

"unmoved." by it all, a statement for better

judgement be to keep the secret of one's gift- 

Prophecy. -

 

 

Still - like the stark of night,
Abomination of all perspectives,
uses such, like a voodoo doll.

To whom not once was made clear,
how threat could still deliver it a strike .

I've singled out the file, but like from like
encourages the silence while the wait
unduly pays a debt, not having moved.

Now, why do crows give out this lewd deception?


Author notes

Prompt 2:


"Like crows that move against winds autumn lick-
Migrating through history."

-by Mango Memories in http://allpoetry.com/poem/5665563

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  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    September 3

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    Oh my dear this is just stunning, I was thinking how did I miss this, but now I know... is something I really must do when I finish with this review... you'll see in just a couple minutes... lol

    I love it and am sure you will take gold with this, i can't imagine anyone topping this entry!

    Best of luck to you my dear friend.

    love

    Suzi


  • crivanea silver member
    September 3

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    speechless..you leave me lingering around this page in hope for another word hidden somewhere in the background.. just stunning....beautiful entry and a wonderful take on the prompt


  • awannabepoet
    August 31

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    One would think that in the day and age of william there was much to be measured and weighed for each word uttered had a price in blood to be paid.

    I like it, I like it so!