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Love In The Rose Garden

So many roses
So many colors
Sweet and happy in bloom

So many days and nights
With you my love will be true
Sensual arm hugging going around the neck and smells of my rose perfume

Rose petal gotee
Isn't it just like you
Happy flapping in the days of June

Reality is a kiss away
Dreams under your breath
Take me now twirl me around and rock me to the left

I want to pin a rose on your shirt underneath your handsome chest
Dance with you under the moon with a rose in my hair
Rose bushes will surround us in this dancing love affair





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  • Navajo Apsara gold member
    October 4

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    This is nice but like Shy said What is gotee? Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing and it was a pretty good read. I enjoy reading Thank you


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    September 2

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    This is a pretty good poem. But what is gotee? I wish you good luck in th contest I love your rose scent its like I can almost smell it. Thank you for sharing.


  • Deaths Prayer
    August 31

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    Rose petal gotee LOL nice intake on that one my friend.

    dreams under your breath nice one i like that line very much.

    Good job!!