Walking alone I start to cry,
I sit in th dark and want to die,
Reaching for my blade I see your face,
I want to move but can't.
You move closer, I look down,
I wipe i tear and try not to frown,
Nothing I say or do helps me,
To hold you in my arms again.
Hiding my face, I feel the blade,
It cuts into my writs not knowing,
I see everything around me starting to fade,
You see me cry as the blood runs down,
You drop down and cry,
Of all thing you didn't want to see me die,
You hold my lifeless body in your arms,
All you wanted to do was say,
"I Love You"
A contest entry
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i love it gary xD
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Wow... really dark and a cutting poem that isn't cliche for once.
I enjoyed this a lot.
Thanks for entering and best of luck
xoxo. -
wow
i have been in this place befor and i know the feelings that come with it! great write -
wow
this poem is really good! i enjoyed reading it. i hope everything is okay!
Good job!! keep up the good work
Ashley -
i loved it, it was really sad and i can feel the depression that is held in u like a sealed bottle that no one can open. keep your head up babe and things will go better for you i swear to you! many
s and 
es! forever and always!
~Gabrielle!~
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