How can I sing?
If there's no tune
How can I be happy?
If you cause my life to doom
How can I feel safe?
If I'm full of fears
How can I cry?
If there's not tears
How can I say I love you?
If you won't listen to me
How can I show you?
that we're meant to be
How can I be your friend?
If we never talk
How can I touch your feelings?
If your heart is locked
How can I care for you?
If you don't have a heart
How can I win?
If there's no start
How can I trust?
If nobody believes in me
How can I fly?
With my broken wings
I wish I could
But I'm not that strong
When I try It always comes out wrong
How can I survive?
My life without you
I wish that you realized
That my love is true
Author notes
A poem I wrote (duh) about 2-3 years ago
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this is truly lovely! i want to hug it until it pops with passion, but i can not do that for i would have to mop the floor then and i do not wish to get up from my chair and clean passion from the floor. but i digress, yes, it is truly beautiful writing that sends out wonderful images for the reader to enjoy! you have fashioned a fine poem (like a brooch onto my heart) that i appreciate so much.
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This is an interesting piece. I like the reference to "how can I" with an explanation as to what it is that is stopping you
Poetically I might suggest changing the font colour, and using some punctuation
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