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Imaginary life


I'm living in a world of nothing
nothingness
the things I thought was right is wrong
but I distinguish the difference
there are non, no, not at all, nothing
this I can comprehend
as far I behold the information
that I do not suffice

I've detected truth
my insides do not dance
I am nothing
and as you are me
you are nothing too
there are non, no, not at all, nothing

That is us
as I grasp my nightmare
and stumble into the wild
as if it was my first steps on earth, I stumble into my nothingness







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I and all the rest of you/me are not as crazy as we might think.. honestly!

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  • individuality gold member
    September 26

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    a good piece of poetry penned, ah perhaps life is all but a dream, an illusion in someone else's head, we might pop out of existence at any time, nothing, a strange but common word we use each and every day.


  • Saint Irial
    September 3
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