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Self Doubt

Birds of a feather
fall from the sky
twisting a feather
and haplessly die.

Mixing their woes
sprouting no wings
chirping sanctimoniously
of rebirth she sings.

Speaking in riddles
so no one can tell
hidden meaning of reasons
send savants straight to hell.

Solve your maze
lay to rest the lies.
Eleventh hour has come
death wears a disguise.

From the kaleidoscope within
look still deeper
unlock your world
escape the reaper.

Author notes

thoughts and emotions...just getting out the cobwebs...

honesty please...

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Legend silver member
    August 31

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    Deep thoughts and cobweb shifting,Guess one has to, when in such a place have to look deeper to see the way out.Self doubt always tends to obscure the doorway
    A fine piece and a pleasure to see you once again penning


    • vici377
      August 31
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      thank you my dear friend your words of support always encourage me...I am blessed be call you friend...


  • trekkergirl
    August 31

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    wow its been a while since last I read anything of yours... and this was a good one to read! Nicely written. Thanks for sharing this with us.


    • vici377
      August 31
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      thank you for your kind words..it is always nice to hear from another writer that something is going in the right direction...
      blessings..
      r