Is it cramp from the damp as we camp
sit still online from dawn till lit lamp,
or hairs rising from head
when uncertain ahead
for excitement removes trace of cramp ?
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Pins and Needles Etymology
Date: 1813
: a pricking tingling sensation in a limb growing numb or recovering from numbness
— on pins and needles : in a nervous or jumpy state of anticipation
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lol... limericks usually bring a smile to my face. this was no exception.
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A good limerick which has my mind tingling to reply to, but sadly it is still suffering from a cramp of its own. All the same, I like the humour and as always your rhythm and rhyme is spot on
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this one was sort of cute... I like the rhymes... and the cramps... they always come about at the worst of times don'tcha think. I like this one. Thanks for sharing!
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