in this drunken state of mind
what i lost i cannot find
you screwed up my life cant you see
you can never be with me
i didnt mean for this all to go wrong
but i couldnt help your kisses or our special song
in that room alone that night
i thought you would know this isnt right
i just followed your lead
but that isnt what i need
you slowly unbuttoned my shirt and kissed me on the neck
your the reason my whole life is now a wreck
it happened so fast i didnt see
how much pain you gave to me
my life is now hell, im always called a whore
i guess i should have known youd always ask for more
the crazy part is the part thats makes me think
this all heppened even though i didnt take a drink
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im not sure if this really fits the catagory but its kinda a way on how i think of people... they will screw you over no matter what
A contest entry
- Interpretations by Faded.
300 points, ended April 6, 2004, 22 entries
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Fits into the category just fine. I felt that you struggled a bit iwth making the poem fit your rhyme though, perhaps you should try free style at some point?
I hope that this didn't happen to you. It was a sad regretful poem but one which echo's so many peoples problems.
I'll be judging my contest soon, so good luck.
~Faded
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