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Silent explosion
Violent hues scattered wide--
Flowers at daybreak

Author notes

For a contest.
After writing a bunch of haiku in Japanese (of which I know little), switching back to English was strangely difficult!

A contest entry

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  • wandyway
    September 3

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    Damn, fantastic imagery. Tricked me into thinking gore and war and slung in pretty morning flowers to trip the theme up

    Total winner for me. Good luck!


  • VelvetWings
    August 31

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    This is pretty! It would be even prettier if the Japanese was here to read too.
    But I like it and have a devastating urge to compete with you in this contest now.
    >D Good luck to both of us XDD
    ~
    Sparrow