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Elixir of Love

Be the wine within my cup
so I may drink of you
Let lips meet upon the rim
for not one time, but two

Quench the thirst within my heart
that seeks your grapes divine
Intoxicate me with your love
again, just one more time

 

-Eddy


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  • Stormraven
    September 25

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    Wonderful

    This one flustered me , my mind raced for ways to melt myself into wine , lovley , storm


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 5

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    RSVP and here I am reading another alluring write..Perfect flow and rhyme here with a touch of the sentiments shared by some of the old great poets of yestyear/
    Such a heartfelt delight to read...First line of each stanza opens the intimate offer of love ...Endearing write..Bravo!