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myth in sleep


Dragon's fire flaming true
Strength is the beauty
that resides within
the heart of the dragon
can't be reached
scale harder than stone
you must speak the language
of the vulnerable heat








Author notes

."Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed." - G.K. Chesterton


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  • PastelMoons gold member
    September 19

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    Congrats on the well deserved shiny
    and on this darkly enchanting write!
    You brought this mystical creature to life!
    Thanks for sharing!

    ~Pastel


  • wander of the sky
    September 14
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    this is wonderful i love dragons


  • LisaRowe silver member
    August 31

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    liked it

    a very good description of what a dragon is and i really like the last line 'vaulnerable heat' very nice