i hurt myself today to see if i could feel pain
the only thing thats real is the familiar sting
i tried to kill it away yet i still remember
the breath taking silver
i close my eyes just erase it from my mind
never in my life have i ever wanted to just run and hide
beneath a cloud of angel dust and deadness at my feet
and i remember everything the memories to beat
i hurt myself today to see if i could feel pain
the only thing thats real is the familiar sting
i tried to kill it away yet i still remember
the breath taking silver
i sit on my bed and run things back through my head
and begin to think that this should be the end
so many lies and secrets hidin
no one there to understand the confusion
i hurt myself today to see if i could feel pain
the only thing thats real is the familiar sting
i tried to kill it away yet i still remember
the breath taking silver
i just fall asleep and lay silently in my bed
i just close my eyes and think of the good memories instead
and i still remember trying to kill it away
the breath taking silver of a bad memory
What did you think
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i love it
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Even if itz from a song or Not
itz Awesome!
Great poem
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thanks that means alot....but seriously until recently when they said it was similar to the nine inch nails song i didn't know it sounded so much alike...but thanks for your comment ^-^
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Sounds a little too much like a Nine Inch Nails song:
i hurt myself today to see if i could feel pain
the only thing thats real is the familiar sting
i tried to kill it away yet i still remember
the breath taking silver < you
I hurt myself today, to see if I still feel [...]
The needle tears a hole, the old familiar sting
Try to kill it all away, but I remember everything. < Nine inch Nails
Why don't you get your own creativity, "poet"? -
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ok i've never heard of nine inch nails and i have my own creativity so sorry if what i wrote seemed to offend you because it was similar to a song that i've never even heard of
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beautiful poem
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cool poem it made me clean my mind out
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"i close my eyes just erase it from my mind
never in my life have i ever wanted to just run and hide
beneath a cloud of angel dust and deadness at my feet" i love those lines. very visual.
great write. it really describes a little of the struggles with tryin to stop and coming close to success in stopping
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