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Creation Perfected

Innocence searching for view,
Gathered by the stale silence.
Golden...
Forward standstill-
Waiting
Creation perfected.

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Posted picture above: http://benoitpaille.deviantart.com/art/A-Young-stranger-boy-2-years-135300441

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 23
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    a nice drawing of the picture you created here