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just rember.... <3

just rember what i said to you
and how i meant it
the words coeming out
of my mouth dont ring true.

i dont no what else to do
apart from hold you down and
scream at you ...
you say all this stuff to me
but just rember you herd it
here first.

im in love with you and it feals
like a curse . i say it to you when
i cant take the worse, and you sit their
and say best firends tell eachover
everything. well i tell you now you
dont wanna no whats on my mind.

so here i go walking out the door,
leaving you their forever more
never to here your voice or touch
your skin, i dont think its ever
hurt this much to leave you.

just rember you herd it here first
i am completly and head over heals
for you i try  to forget and it makes me
sad. truth is i wish i was her. 

that girl you love insted of me
ive tried and tried but i cant let go
your the only thing that im sertan of
you make me belive i can jump and youll
catch me and ill be safe.

sometimes i think if maybe when i say
i love you youll say it back without
thinking but you dont. thats all i want
take away everything from me it means
nothing if i cant have you, well if i cant
have you id rather be locked away.

its just another thing thats out of
my reach and i cant meet you.
i just wont.
i wont let you hug me
i wont let you get close
that way i cant fall any harder
but you cant break a broken heart can you ?



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im done with this. no more. nothing. just proves im worthless..

i just dont know.

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  • RazorBladesRomance
    November 17
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    Uh i knoow how you feel it sux to be in that position.


    • dani girl
      November 18
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      awww

      thanks im not in that postition anymore im in love with my G.F got msn ?


  • Fallen-Thumper gold member
    September 19

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    wow this poem says so much and it holds to be said aswell. i really loved this piece and it is really well written, just fantastic, the last line was amazing and just made me think, yes you can break a broken heart, it tends to shatter though. I really did enjoy this and i can relate to it. Brilliant!

  • This poem isn't bad. It's like a torrent of emotion that's begged to be loosed.

    You've probably heard this before, but it bares repeating: no human being is worthless, so don't be so hard on yourself! Yes, things like this definately hurt, but just because you can feel the pain of unrequited love doesn't mean that you aren't worth anything!


    Hope this helps

    • dani girl
      September 18
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      thanks

      sometime i miss them so much i dont think the pain can be real it hurts so bad,


  • dani girl
    August 30
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    ok.

    have you ever woke up and all you thought about was that person
    then you go to sleep and their all you dream of with the ocasional nightmare...
    do you evan no what love is.....

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