Our lips to find a sweet ecstasy
in calming peaceful play
Taste of your love does kiss my tongue
and carry me away
In raptures supple warm embrace
we feel our naked bodies glide
As if on ice we dance this dance
with passion as our guide
Mere ashes left from bliss’s flames
skin washed by cresting seas
Once again my wanton hopes
will bring this thirsting mouth to please
Thrusting forth the minutes spent
in replete with lustful joy
Ample smiles followed by moans
brought by a favorite yellow toy
With the warning of impending cries
your body writhing from the heat
Kisses gently sup your flow
as the dew runs to your feet
Driving deep to petals edge
your pulsing bud to future bloom
Resting in the lovely damp
to calmly lie inside the womb
And think delightful maybes
of the things I’d love to do
Like spend my days elated
in the quest of pleasing you
Author notes
Sensual challenge:
My word is Tranquility
Using word bank:
Replete
Taste
Rapture
Ice
Ashes
Yellow
Minute
Future
Warning
Maybe
A contest entry
- The Erotic Challenge (Round 3) by Corvus Corone.
600 points, ended October 5, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Sorry for the delay in judging due to illness. Master Ktulu has restarted the Erotic Challenge so I am judging as a normal contest.
I really liked the flow of this poem, and the content is sultry and hot leaving that yearning desire with the reader. The alternating rhyme scheme is delicious.
CC
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Very sultry and passionate; I think you should do well in this challenge
Made me think of moments with my special someone...
All the very best to you!! -
With these words that speak on the soft and sensual side of passion. You have made the words flow with the easy of love itself. Beautiful my sweet Pirate.
Riftkin
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Typo in line one: ecstasy! The ecstasy in the poem is very "liquidy" isn't it? But then I suppose sex is really quite a messy business. As Woody Allen said - "Is sex dirty? Yes, only when it's done right."
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Wow, I am completely speechless. Perfect with the rhyme and flow, and the passion is definitely there. I didn't even want this write to end!
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brilliant
your words float effortlessly and beautifully...this is a delightful piece.
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you have done it once again with this piece. I am amazed. Good luck in the contest! Love it... So subtle, soft and sensual.
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A beautiful sensual piece
Writing sensual (erotic) in a soft tone as you have is very difficult for me to do
Very impressive
Of course, I know your inspiration
Wish you the very best in the contest my freind
Take care
David
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So beautifully passionate and sensual
I wish you the best in this challenge; this piece deserves the best!
Good luck!
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subtle sensuality...i like this piece...gorgeous writ
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