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Static

Blitzkrieg!
Do not stop us
You will surely bleed!

Transparent, yet fully seen
We will stop at nothing
Till we hear you scream!

Blitzkrieg!
Do not seek help from us
We will tarnish your seed!

Infiltrating the senses
A mirage we mimic
We'll liquidate all who witness

Daily, nightly we distribute our ashes
Plumes of white, contrails your media wishes
Your planet, our stashes

For more than 50 years, we've lived amongst you
We will not cease till all thats left are the flies
Slowly we've seen your gov't grow more silent, tighter we're turning the screw

You know we are here now
Do not attempt to change the dial
Submissive peasant souls you are, soon you will surely bow.

Author notes

this is more or less written in response to this theory: http://artificialclouds.com/
im not sure if i believe these conspiracies, but its still a good prompt to begin a scifi piece. enjoy the read!

Ha ha ha ha ha, in the name of His Lordship, the end is NIGH!

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Melee Vau gold member
    September 12

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    orwellian scifi

    really enjoy this piece, very well written, such foreboding and dark presence. reminds me of the George Orwell 1984 quote: •"Thoughtcrime does not entail death: thoughtcrime is death." - George Orwell, 1984, Book 1, Chapter 2


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    September 2

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    Cool, great stuff!!!

    Great take on your chosen prompt with a wonderful dark undertone that enthralled throughout...
    Awesome as always...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • consternation imply
    August 30

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    who knows, maybe it will all get better one day, til then I guess I'm glad that america exists and scifi is a good imagination. You are a great writer with an interesting mind. I am glad that the opportunity to read it did not pass me by.