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Watching You Leave

You'd think after three times
It wouldn't hurt so bad
But every time you leave
It's like a million knives in my back
Three times I've watched you walk away
Three times I've heard goodbye
But that doesn't make it easier
Without you what is life?
I keep trying to keep smiling
Like I did both times before,
Once again you leave my heart
It's shattered on the floor
You say that you're so busy,
I know that means I'm not worth your time
Don't you think you could have said that before
I thought you were almost mine
I thought you'd be with forever
I thought for once my love was returned
But this is the third time
My heart has been burned
You've walked away from me,
Walked away from my feelings
I can't wait till you realize
You feel the same things

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its crap
i kno.
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  • katlyncold
    September 26
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    great poem! loved it!!!!!!!!!!

  • hend shaheen
    September 23

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    totally not crap so strong and full of emotions...ya its strange how every time someone walks out our heart breaks again even though it hapenned before!

  • catstar
    September 6
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    No, I don't agree it's not crap, it's really good and very powerful. I like it.


  • sexy emo fairy
    August 30
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    I don't think it's crap...