What is good and evil,
only spirits know,
the grendel walks among us,
and hides within the snow.
The great spirit walks beside us,
and doesn't wish us harm,
it passes us its wisdom,
as it's subtle little charm.
The spirit once bestowed me,
with a psalm of sorts one day,
it told me of a conflict,
that everyone obeyed.
"Deep within our spirits,
two wolves do ever fight,
one of blacked ebony,
and the other snowy white.
One is darkest evil, the other brightest light."
I asked the spirit which will win,
and he told me to take heed,
"The only wolf who'll ever win,
is the only wolf you feed."
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Well written, I believe in the wisdom of the wind...
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cool poem
i like that thats nice really cool poem
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Excellent
This is amazing, wonderful!
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*hugs!!* sugoi writing my friend...i love it...very beautiful...i agree with others that your rhyme is great....prefect writing my friend i love it!!!!
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Very nicely done
You have taken the legend and brought it to life. Very good imagery, emotions flows from the page. The rhyme is great. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck
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I enjoyed this write, I like your rhyme scheme a lot. Your poem flows so nicely and really captures the picture. Good luck in the contest!
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