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valentime peom

Kiss me,

I am full of treats,

do you know what it is?

Chocolate kisses!

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  • Beauty Of Silence
    September 1
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    awww. short and sooo sweet

    gosh, now i've the urge to get some chocolate anyhoo, nice write. write more


  • Fallen-Thumper gold member
    August 31
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    Sweeet!

    Beautiful and really sweet.

    Great write and i really liked it. Amazing!

    -Broken-


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    August 31

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This is cute
    Chocolate is some people's favourite... chocolate kisses could only get better!

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask
    I encourage you to comment others and generate activity for yourself!

    Good job, keep writing.


  • She burns
    August 30
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