Ruins paint earth
Beneath smoked skies
Where death dances… life’s postponed
Author notes
Just watching movie about bitter reality going on in every corner of the world - terrorism inspired me to pen these words.
A contest entry
- Super Quickie! first five to pen on the prompt...already posted... by islekine.
460 points, ended August 30, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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so much imagery and meaning in so few lines. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Beautiful wording, sad but true - great images! I really liked this.
Congrats on the Bronze.
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Wonderful write!
Thanks so much for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on!
and
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and i think we've got the winner here....fantastic, hauntingly beautiful write. good luck! (though you surely won't need it)
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What a thought provoking write.
I love the wording and imagery within it.
Nicely done in few words.
Good luck!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~ The Rocker Who Lost All -
Strongly written ^^
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