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Postponed - or Procrastinating?

I postponed death
decided to live
awhile longer
the devil can......

Author notes

you said 11 words - you have to fill in the rest....lololol

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  • Judith Chandler
    September 27

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    the devil can take the hindmost. Enjoyed your 11 words and congrats on your gold trophy.


    • aboomer silver member
      September 27
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      thank you Judith for reading/commenting. Glad you enjoyed this.


  • PastelMoons gold member
    September 19

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    LOL hmmmm thinks (stops thinking 'cause it hurts) okay I got it
    the devil can-- take my ex instead !
    Love this hun!

    ~Pastel

    P.S Congrats on the Gold!!!

    • aboomer silver member
      September 20
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      lolol - I like that Pastel! good one!
      thanks - glad you enjoyed.


  • Gwenevere
    September 13

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    "go without his supper tonight"!!!! love it.There are so many endings to this poem, it could drive a girl to drink.Ah well, here goes----- Cheers!!!!


    • aboomer silver member
      September 16
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      lol - doesn't take much sometimes to drive a girl to drink, does it.....lol
      thanks so much Gwenevere - glad you enjoyed this.


  • LordBoomyson
    September 8

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    Stunning

    I would add at the end, "Go to Hell!"
    or "Oy! Grim Reaper! I want you in my office ... NOW!"

    Wait! I jest, lol!
    Poem is devilishly succinct and very effective, wd!


    • aboomer silver member
      September 8
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      thank you so much for reading and your wonderful comment LordBoomyson. Glad you enjoyed this.
      We could only have 11 words - I started typing my thoughts and was over that number, so I backspaced until I hit 11....that is where this ended....lololol
      best wishes


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 7

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    Heck yes!!! You said it Congrats on the gold


  • Denerica silver member
    August 31

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    Amen! Deserving of the gold...yep the devil can just....um flee in Jesus name! Excellent. Blessings.

    • aboomer silver member
      August 31
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      thank you Denerica - glad you enjoyed.
      yes.....lol.....I like your ending!


  • islekine gold member
    August 30

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    How about...

    "Kiss my fannie?"...lol I like that ending!
    Thanks for entering...best wishes in the contest and always! Write on and on and on...

    and


    • aboomer silver member
      August 30
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      lol - I had started typing - too many words - cut it back to 11 - that's where it ended....lolol


  • Mango Memories gold member
    August 30

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    hahahah!


    very clever.


    Kiss my hairy ballsacs - is the correct termonlogy, dear.

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