Feeling tired,my head is numb,
Feeling stupid,but I'm not dumb.
Feeling restless,I can't sit still,
Feeling empty,but have my fill.
Feeling lonely,but not alone
Feeling darkness,where light has shone.
Feeling desperate,But I won't ask,
Feeling entergetic,but can't complete the task.
Feeling ashamed,but walking proud,
Feeling quiet,but screaming LOUD!
Feeling sad,but won't shed a tear,
Feeling tortured,but won't show fear.
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Written April 2nd, 2004
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I like the style of this, everybody feels each and every one of those things at least once, and you managed to word it great
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hey this is julie i love this pome and i love u alwas and forever julie
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thank you leeeverage for your comment. i added you to my favorites because eveyone of yours i've read so far are really good!~sherry
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greatly creative
very nice! I like the style...very smooth.. -
thank you very much! that makes me feel really good
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this is so great!!!!!!!!! i seriously like it alot. i mean, the way you wrote your opposites and then had the rhyming still flow!! awesome!
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