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The stalest quill still writes.

This verse is long expired,
as you have not returned
to pollinate these pages with those sighs.
Nectar drips sweetest
when it trickles from your countenance--
it trickles from your mien.
It was my only ink.

My old calligraphy retreats at length
into a dimmension
somewhere between the lines of
this blankening page...
My calligraphy ferments
before your stares.
Grant, at least, some fructose
so that I can recall
these diaphonous words
to a worldly color:
one which my eyes can oversee--
one which my sense may oversee
(if it so pleases).

Their element evaporates
under your torrid scrutiny;
they accumulate
so deep in my eyes
that you should not observe them--
you should not perceive them--
unless you would (or could) divert your own
from a parched, deserted canvas
and look up.

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  • candela696
    August 30

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    Wow.... I like this poem. The imagery is awesome!! Please keep writing