Santas Elfs Have been working hard
Recieving plenty of christmas card
rudolph the rednose reindeer runs
whilst the rest follow having fun
Santas checking whos been naughty and nice
The north poles completly ice
Let Us gather round the christmas tree
Exchanging presents from you to me
its decorated so greatly with many a bell
a scratch and a srape from where i once fell
The tinsle on the tree is shining
The star above is gold and blinding
Snow falling, Bells ringing
Snowman building, Carol singing
For the time has come once again
for good will to all men
How was it?
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
This is a really cute poem. Your rhyme is pretty well done (but the second line should be "cards") You point out many great things about Christmas that people love.
I think that the font colour could be changed to make it easier to read
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Jeez Christmas already ? and me not done any shopping I wonder if i can tell everyone its been canceled because of Swine flu
A most enjoyable read Well done
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