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Kentucky and the Sea

 

 

Tobacco fields went on for miles in all direction.
The plants looked like cabbage my Grandfather grew;
only they were enormous in size,

and screamed unreal to me.


The day had past without a single ride, my thumb
was in need of some rest and a bit of magic.
The bluegrass night warmed me like a baby
wrapped within a Mothers love. I fell into

a deep sleep, slipping further away from
passing headlights, and thoughts of tomorrow.


Perhaps it was foolish to think Florida would greet
this leather tramp with open arms; that the white sands
and warm waters would somehow fill the emptiness within.
But my feet carried me still, like a salmon heading upstream,
sure of my purpose, unaware of the future.


Half a spring and summer went by, finally the sea had found
me smiling. I was gifted memories that will last a lifetime.
Emptiness was no more, as I gazed into the beauty of
a sunrise, over an endless blue.

 

 

 

 

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1997

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  • Jesann gold member
    September 9

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    A delightful read of your memories.
    The first 3 verses could easily be the start of a book....a few more gaps (chapters) filled between there and the 4th verse and there you'd have it !!!
    I loved your opening verse...your wording throughout fills the mind with great visual imagery.
    I thoroughly enjoyed the read.


  • Desire gold member
    August 31

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    Precious~

    Bless Your Heart my Friend and what a story
    that touches deep~ Love the Metaphors
    also the Images which stain the Mind
    Gosh~ You took me there
    Bravo!!

    Adore the line: my thumb was in need of
    some rest~ Just Love that
    Keep that quill dancingYay!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • tara wilson gold member
    August 31

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    i really, really enjoyed this Tony. Wonderful work.


  • Cannonsfire
    August 31

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    Some memories are simply made to last for lifetimes C


  • maralisa silver member
    August 31

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    aw a wonderful write good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    August 30

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    I love this. There are so many scents, scenes, and colours in this. Now that's poetry! I love the voice I heard when I read this. It sounded nostalic and calm.

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~

  • Bob Fox
    August 30

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    My

    And to see the brillance still. I guess it proves we can always treasure our memories and still move forward in life.

  • I can picture you thumbing your way across country seaching for the blue waters of the gulf. Very adventurous to take a trip.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 30

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    I just love how you tell a story,
    so vivid with color, and meaning.
    Tony, you gift is surpass any common
    mans thoughts, just beautiful!
    Thank you for all that you are to us that
    read you.
    with Love and Blessings

    Rend


  • Mango Memories
    August 30

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    oooo... the image this planted in my mind! i loved it!

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