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Get up and dance

Hey baby, Get up and dance
It's time you had a little romance
Hiding in the dark all night
Its time for a little candle light

Get up and keep the beat
Watch them, as you move your feet
Sway those hips and draw them in
Come on Baby, Be alive once again

I've hear them playing our song
Come on, prove them all wrong
Take my hand and give it a spin
Let the passion burn deep within

Get up baby and move with me
Pretend I'm the only one you see
Make them wish they had a taste
Of just the fire we let go to waste

Here we go up into the air spinning fast
As our song, I pray this moment will last
The beat slows and your body draws near
I whisper I've missed you my dear

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Lets dance

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  • LittleLoverSoPolite
    September 17

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    *smirks* I didn't know you had it in you..."to get up and dance" unless of course you are otherwise speaking of some other type of dancing....and then...
    Needless to say...great write. =]

  • thunderingpanther
    September 4

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    this is very good....i like the "get up ...." the encouragment of it, the if you trust in yourself and in me all is good around us, because it is just the two of us that matter in this moment.....
    in the third stanza was wondering if you ment - I hear them playing our song- or -I've heard them playing our song- Instead of " I've hear them playing our song"??????


  • GypsyRoseDancer
    September 2

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    This is beautiful, sensual, and playful. It reminds me of a night-blooming flower - hibernating to bud and bloom again. I like the reputation of "get up" because in this sense it sounds encouraging. A sort of gesturing "come and run away with me".

    Gypsy--^-<<


  • Delete---
    August 30
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    this is good.
    i miss you sometimes.