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The hounds of summer lie in the shade of stilled swings,

their ears splayed upon the wooden porch

as though listening for sudden hoofbeats of memories

or the dripping of rains yet to be.

 

The cats watch them curiously through mere windows,

their heads tilted in bemusement

at perceived follies or perhaps contemplating

a certain pounce, lessons to be taught with sheathed claws.

 

They adore each other, although it is an impossible gesture, humans swear

(they were never told, or never agreed to the prejudice,

so it does not enter their tender natures).

 

The fruit is drooping, falling from trees bent with weariness 

at bearing such delectable weight upon their thin branches.

The bees hover, their drones perceptible with hunger

and duty for their queen, who is restless at home in the stickysweet hive.

 

Jade butterflies descend upon red spheres hanging low in the garden,

awaiting the ultimate pluck - they remain unable to taste the meaty salvations,

so lift off in search of a willing wildflower to surrender its final nectar.

 

Autumn is swooping in from a casual distance,

covering the fields with fiery colors thick with drenching.

 

Love’s rhythm pulses through the landscape,

huge with pursuits of amber knowledge,

fragrant with fertile secrets below the mist,

as yet to be discovered

by the seeking hands of harvest.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Photographer unknown
 
 
Inspired by "Ground Zero" by Danny Beatty
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • Jonathan ROBIN
    September 13

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    Lone Drone

    The fruit is drooping, falling from trees bent with weariness at bearing such delectable weight upon their thin branches. The bees hover, their drones perceptible with hunger and duty for their queen, who is restless at home in the stickysweet hive.


    Drones rarely hover - then not long -
    brief honeymoon their only song,
    new queen, once filled, her spouse discards
    soon tail, tale, told, mens' lives are hard !


  • pinkink
    September 4

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    "their ears splayed upon the wooden porch
    as though listening for sudden hoofbeats of memories
    or the dripping of rains yet to be"
    Awesome! Great description here. That was my fav part.

  • Just4u
    August 30

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    Where minds and hearts converge, anything is possible...


    Eddy


  • JinSays gold member
    August 30

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    The fruit is drooping, falling from trees bent with weariness
    at bearing such delectable weight upon their thin branches.

    Besides the picture you use being absolutely adorable, the story you tell is unique, tangible, and lovely, and no surprises there, you've always managed to capture that essence that is so appealingly poetic in everyday life.
    Another listed, something I will read again and again.
    love,
    jin