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Needs

Love

Peace

Happiness

A contest entry

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    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • mgmc gold member
    September 10

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    Great title that adds explanation to the next three words. Great choice of three words.
    Big impression made with the use of four total words. Nice work!


  • daviscth silver member
    August 31

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    You have touched on how many people feel with this wonderful three word poem. Good luck in the contest.


  • tawk gold member
    August 30

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    You've said it all! Good luck in the contest, hugs Theresa


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    August 30
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    All I can do is
    *APPLAUD*