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Wants

....Money....
...Power...
..Respect..

A contest entry

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  • mgmc gold member
    September 10

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    Another three word poem that says a lot. Wants, the title, adds clarity (as opposed to needs). Three common wants. Hard to know whether you want things until you have them in hand....then you may continue to want them or find other things more significant to you.


  • daviscth silver member
    August 31

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    What a wonderful three word poem you have created here. Good luck in the contest dear.


  • tawk gold member
    August 30

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    Great write, I know we never have enough money to make ends meet, and I would love to be respected by all, but power it does not matter to me. Wonderful take on the prompt. Thanks for viewing my write, good luck, hugs Theresa


  • Diablosanjil
    August 30

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    WOW. strong, and something everyone wants.. If I am reading this right I am a bit confused on what ..Mespect.. is.. I was thinking maybe a typo but not sure. either way it is a powerfully written poem